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I want to go out
And drink coffee.

Talk about life
And kiss you.

But that is silly isn't it?
I don't like coffee much.

I'll just buy some for you
So I can watch you smile.

Then lets dance and laugh because
It's an amazing feeling to be loved.
DREAMS FREAKING STOP IT! OKAY I GET IT! I MIGHT LIKE THEM! I DEFINETLY WANT TO KISS THEM! Now can we please focus on, oh I don't know, anything else? 

Simple little poem on a reaccuring deam of mine. >.>
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avalanchepark Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
wonderfully light writing, sweet image
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Student Writer
Thanks c: 
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Simmeh Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
Coffee is wonderful. :heart:
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Writer
That it is :heart: 
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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I can relate to this SO HARD xD
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student Writer
I'm happy you can xD And thank you for the favorite ^_^ 
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! :D
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hell, I'll add it too.

and I like coffee. Too much really :P
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks ^_^

I'm personally not a fan of coffee, I can drink it sometimes. I'm more of a tea person. 
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Those 5 dollar "make it youself at home" Starbucks ice coffee carafes you can buy in the store.
They're still so sweet you can drink 'em black...   yum. :) 
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Student Writer
It does sound good, but I'm so picky I probably wouldn't enjoy it nearly as much as you 
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kanfyetka Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this! It's so simple and honest, the whole reason we all write poetry to begin with.
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :) I'm happy you liked it ^-^
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kanfyetka Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Writer
^_^ Thank you, that's one of my favorite comments I've received on this piece. 

Nice saying, sometimes it's very true for me.
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Irishfury97 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
This reminds me of someone I know personally...very poignant work:)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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WalkingMadness Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Professional Writer
AWESOME PIECE!! Love it!!
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! <3 I'm happy you like it! ^_^
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WalkingMadness Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Professional Writer
No probies :D And I do, I really do :D :D
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The-Story-Spinner Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so sweet! I think it is simple but it says all it needs to say. My one suggestion is that you might want to take out the periods after each stanza. They break the poem up and make it feel like there is an ending and a pause between each stanza. That could be a good thing if that's what you were going for, though.
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you ^_^
That was the intent, my dreams about it tended to be a little stop and go, with sudden blackness so I tried to mimic it a little with the pausing.
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l-Unoriginally-l Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Very nice and sweet :heart:
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :heart: 
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l-Unoriginally-l Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
You're very welcome(:
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Thrushwing484 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love this.. so relatable actually
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Writer
I'm happy you like it, thank you :) 
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TinyandHuge Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Adorable
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks ^-^
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TinyandHuge Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Welcome!
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chichichichipndale Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What if I hate coffee?
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
I don't like coffee much either, so what is your drink of choice? 
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chichichichipndale Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The blood of the innocent.  Or just Mountain Dew
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
We could drink Mountain Dew then, which flavor would you prefer?
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SeamlessMaiden Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
This is adorable. And it's funny because my best friend is just like this, even with the coffee part. I really enjoyed reading it! <3
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :) 
Awe ^-^
Well I'm happy you liked it <3 
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SeamlessMaiden Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Of course!
It was a joy to read! <3
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Coffee is alright, but I prefer to drink tea.
Thank you :)
Well I'm sorry you're lonely after your dreams, maybe some day you will meet the woman that has been starring in them
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JJQinc Featured By Owner Edited Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem,  ^_^



I just uploaded this close to the same time you submited this XD Cup a Joe
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you ^_^

Really? wow lol we must of had coffee on our minds. xD
I like it ^-^
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JJQinc Featured By Owner Edited Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome and thank you, 

yeah and it is weird because i do not even drink coffee lol

and thank you for the llama llama cancanllama cancan 
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
I don't drink coffee all to much, only once and awhile when I need the pick me up of caffeine. 

You're welcome :) 
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JJQinc Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Usually just the smell of coffee is enough to wake me up XD
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
xD I wish it was for me, that would be such a nice change, but the smell of it can actually make me sleepy lol so I have to actually drink it to take any effect. 
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JJQinc Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, that seems to be the case for most people ^_^ 
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LinaLestrangeArt Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Awww!!!! Llama Emoji-74 (My kawaii cheeks) [V4] 
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you ^-^
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One-eyeHitomi Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I wouldn't know the feeling, but this is a nice poem all the same. :-)
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