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I want to go out
And drink coffee.

Talk about life
And kiss you.

But that is silly isn't it?
I don't like coffee much.

I'll just buy some for you
So I can watch you smile.

Then lets dance and laugh because
It's an amazing feeling to be loved.
DREAMS FREAKING STOP IT! OKAY I GET IT! I MIGHT LIKE THEM! I DEFINETLY WANT TO KISS THEM! Now can we please focus on, oh I don't know, anything else? 

Simple little poem on a reaccuring deam of mine. >.>
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kanfyetka Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
I love this! It's so simple and honest, the whole reason we all write poetry to begin with.
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :) I'm happy you liked it ^-^
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kanfyetka Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Writer
^_^ Thank you, that's one of my favorite comments I've received on this piece. 

Nice saying, sometimes it's very true for me.
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Irishfury97 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
This reminds me of someone I know personally...very poignant work:)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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luisasilveira26 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Professional Writer
AWESOME PIECE!! Love it!!
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! <3 I'm happy you like it! ^_^
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luisasilveira26 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Professional Writer
No probies :D And I do, I really do :D :D
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