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I hold her hand tightly

Taking care to make sure she is safe

Loved and valued, she is more a woman than I

She calls me her guardian angel.


I protect her from the cruel world

That destroyed me and my dreams.

Shielding her from all the pain around,

Letting her grow at her own pace until she is ready.


But soon I will have to step back,

Holding my breath hoping she won't be crushed

She sees the world in it's true light and soars

As I'm left on the ground, my wings far to broken to fly.


I love her,

So I let her go.

So I wrote this while sitting in guidace hating the world listening to Let her Go-Passenger So I felt kinda happy and sad at the same time. I made this. I like it. Enjoy.
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful. :)

I'm sure you will be a wonderful mother one day. :)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you
That's so sweet of you ^_^
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are welcome :)
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Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful :heart: who is it about?
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Writer
It was more of an in the moment, intense feeling sort of thing. I don't think I wrote it about someone specifically. And thank you :heart: 
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Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem! :D
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DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This brought a tear to my eye as so: :')

Beautifully written.. <3
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student Writer
I'm happy to have provoked emotion <3 Thank you.
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DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe <3 You're truly welcome :meow:
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cebinc Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful and congrats with the feature!!
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much <3
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cebinc Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer

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robodude2829 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome song, and awesome poem.
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer

I know, I love the song. :)

And thank you ^_^

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TobbieGurl385 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student General Artist
I love this. Love it!
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much ^_^ I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it.
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TobbieGurl385 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student General Artist
:)
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PurpleRayRomeo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifulllll Sammy :') <3
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much it means a lot to me. <3
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Natsuko2011 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Oh what love does
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:iconsammylovesyoulots:
Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Writer
Such a powerful confusing emotion.
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Staircase7 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So Sad :(
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Writer
Sad but true.
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doodles-and-poetry Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this poem, but there are two tiny things that you may want to edit.  The third-to-last line should say "too broken to fly," rather than "to broken to fly." And the line above that should use "its" rather than "it's."  Just little typos, but I figure it is better to know, you know! 
Great poem though :)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :) I'm surprised someone else didn't catch that. 
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KouyaMoonlight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well done..even though you love someone dear, if you know things are going to end badly, no matter how much you try to salvage them, while it may seem "the easy way out" its not..you'r gonna hurt, but knowing what you did was for the best ( real life example)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much. I know.. It's so difficult at times to let loved ones go. But there are always people that will mean a lot to you in life, but are meant to leave at some point.
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KouyaMoonlight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly..and while their memories will stay with you, you also have to let those go, lest they haunt you and drag you back down
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Writer
So true.
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KouyaMoonlight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i really do love your work, its amazing keep it up!
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you, it means a lot to me :D
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KouyaMoonlight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
never give up on yourself or your art, you possess a talent many have, but refuse to look for
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Writer
You're so kind :D Thank you for all of the support.
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WideEyedDelusions Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is gorgeous.
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Writer

Thank you I'm glad you like it :)

I'm thank you so much for the favorite <3

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MissesUnlucky Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is so beautiful! :')
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much :) <3
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xxScarletRainxx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I love this very much <3
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you <3 I'm happy that you do.
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Be calm, my feels.Clap :( (Sad) 
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you I think lol :)
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello!

I happen to see your poem and I would just like to compliment on your poem. I like it a lot. It feels genuine and excellently expressed.

Have a lovely day. :)
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer

Hi there!


Thank you, it means a lot to me. Thanks for taking the time to read it ^_^


I hope you have a lovely day too. :) 

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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome! :)
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KittySib Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww. This is very sweet!:D
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :D <3
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